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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Start (01/16/06)
My Adventure
I think it time,
for me to embark
on a brand new adventure.
To establish a fresh new connection,
with the other side.
Launch out my ship,
and head for the shores,
of Glory Land.
There's an chasm in front of me,
that will grant me passage,
I'll depart this life,
full of joy and expectancy.
I set out to begin again,
a life with my soulmate.
Together, we will create,
a new beginning .
.One of adoration and praise,
for Jehovah.
What an adventure it will be.
Tears will fall when we lay vulnerable,
in the presence of Yeshua.
All voids will vanish,
in His smile.
Together we will create,
a new beginning,
God will setup our positions,
in His Kingdom.
We will weep with joy,
and the past
will disolve
In the twitch of His eye.
We will undertake,
the promises
of our Salvation.
Termination of th
e old man,
will be imediate.
And the outcome will be,
amazing, and
even overwhelming.
An adventure
of permanc
e, love and security,There wil be no fear.
We will be content
to await,
for the next adenture,
when the soldiers of Yeshua,
will follow Him into battle.

Irene C. Allen
January 18, 2006
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Jan Ackerson
01/24/06
I love the line "All voids will vanish / In His smile". Good job! If you hit "preview" before you submit, you'll see where the formatting has done funny things with your spacing and punctuation. And the line "There's a chasm in front of me / That will grant me passage" is unclear. This poem is full of hope and enthusiasm--good job!