The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice story! I enjoyed it. A little tightening up of some sentences and recheck all the punctuation and this will be even better!You wrote about a topic many can relate to or will. thank you!
I agree that many will be able to relate. I also liked that you were able to have a clear conflict and resolution in such a short story!
This had a good starting point, filled out nicely in the middle and thoughtful in the ending. Couldn't ask for more!