The Official Writing Challenge
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05/26/17
It is nice to see how you express your opinion so vehemently! I liked the perfection of your broken paragraphs and the alignment of your points. I couldn't find a misspelled word. Keep writing! You did a great job. Blessings
05/27/17
Fabulous message, well done!
Blessings~
05/28/17
You did a wonderful job organizing and explaining points supporting your opinion. Each point was clear and concise. I personally enjoy this writing style. Keep writing.
05/29/17
You gave some very compelling arguments against texting. I can only think of a couple of good reasons for texting.

You were very clear and precise about what you were writing about. I would like to see you take a couple of hose points and bring them to life by showing us what texting does to break down communication. Show a diner with texting, show what devastation comes from texting while driving.

Use dialogue to break up and give life to your writing.

Good job and hope to see some more of your work. God bless.