The Official Writing Challenge
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04/21/17
Good message...great job with the topic.

Blessings~
I like what you have written but am sorry to say that even some people (Christians) believe part of what the Bible says but not all of what it says.

For better arrangements for your statements or arguments I would put the two sentences about the creation of man in a separate paragraph and keep the statements about the ecosystems and the earth in general in their own paragraphs.

Since you might want to have the statements about the creation of man be the most important, you might want them the come at the close or your points.

If we can believe that Jesus rose from the dead after three days, why can't we believe the creation story. Which would be harder for God to do?
I like what you have written but am sorry to say that even some people (Christians) believe part of what the Bible says but not all of what it says.

For better arrangements for your statements or arguments I would put the two sentences about the creation of man in a separate paragraph and keep the statements about the ecosystems and the earth in general in their own paragraphs.

Since you might want to have the statements about the creation of man be the most important, you might want them the come at the close or your points.

If we can believe that Jesus rose from the dead after three days, why can't we believe the creation story. Which would be harder for God to do?