The Official Writing Challenge
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02/14/05
Nicely written.
Exactly, the ending said it all, "When God looks down..." I wonder what he sees in the world the way it is now?
02/15/05
Nice--some good thoughts. Thank you for sharing this poem.
02/16/05
"And a good old fashion hug is better anyways..." That line is so true! Many times more can be with a compassionate embrace than with any form of language. This is a great reminder not to retreat from the call of hospitality. - Nancy
02/17/05
liked that you included kind words...sometimes we'll give our shirts away but not our kind words.