The Official Writing Challenge
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This is definitely out of the box story on the topic. The absence of proper punctuation interrupted the flow at time. This could totally be my ignorance, but I think of polygamy as more of an US problem, so the UK voice sounded odd, but it also broadened my thinking and made me realize it can and does happen everywhere. A story that makes one think is always good. G=eat job. Keep writing.
This is a very interesting life story the scenes and settings of which we don't always get to see.
03/18/17
Most interesting story. You didn't say it was non-fiction, but I am assuming it is. You have so many interesting twists to your life. Some seem so childish and then others seem so beyond childhood behavior. This site will give you lots of help with your writing skills. Use it and write lots more about your life as a child. Most interesting. I am so glad you found the Lord. You could be such a great warrior for God's word and a help to others in similar lifestyles. God bless.
03/18/17
You did very well in painting the pictures of your life through your writing. That is a plus for me being one of your readers :)

I had trouble at first knowing if you were female or male. Toward the end you did mention it.

You were definitely on topic and did quiet well. Keep writing and giving the glory to God!