The Official Writing Challenge
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02/16/17
I love your poem, I feel the same why would He want me. How wonderful that He does.
A beautiful poem!
02/17/17
Wonderful job!
Lovely,
Blessings~
02/17/17
I don't know a thing about poetry, and often don't get its meaning, but your poem touched my heart. Beautifully poetic (to me anyway) with a clear message of grace and love.
That was a long pleasant read till I got to see where it might lead and then the interruption came and we took the other road.

I though it was well thought out. You might want to even out some of the longer lines for a smoother poetic read.

Nice going.