The Official Writing Challenge
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01/13/17
Well done. I read five sentences before I realized it was poetry.

So - a bit of formatting, please (smile).

This is not bad at all. I am not a poet, but this was different and held my interest.

Blessings
01/14/17
Wow...powerfully done!
Loved your words of conviction and the message of rebirth and renewal.

Great job!!

God bless~
You have put together a vivid picture of the past - failure - but also looked ahead with hope.

Your vocabulary for this piece was "choice".