The Official Writing Challenge
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09/02/16
This was good as you revealed how easily temptations come in, and then you countered it with God's remedy for a humdrum marriage. You do need to add white space to make it easier to read.
09/03/16
Very well depicted story illustrating the battle of "temptations" and "fleshy" thoughts which can bring trouble if we give in to it.

Great job with the topic and a penetrating message to boot.

God bless~
This story could have gone two different ways. You chose the good way which many of today's couples refuse to take. This could encourage some to think again and so choose the good way.

Nice story writing.