The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/16
Loved this - good job.
02/15/16
The only thing I didn't get was this line in the story:
She said, “I heard you can cook, Miss. Thing.”
02/17/16
Red ink: first sentence in p. 3 is awkward. Can't decide if it is a matter of pronouns or verbs? It was an interesting story. Sounds true.
02/17/16
Loved it!

Blessings~
02/18/16
Wow, what a way to start a career.
02/18/16
Watch that your verbs match your nouns ie. "was no doubt or reservation" OR "were no doubts or reservations".

The story was an exciting adventure though and your writing style and use of word variety made reading easy and enjoyable.
02/18/16
Congrats!
Blessings~
02/18/16
Congratulations, AnnMarie, on your story placing in the highly commendable category in Beginners.