The Official Writing Challenge
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God has a unique way of getting our attention.

I would have liked to see you separate the paragraphs a bit more, it was a bit hard to read. I enjoyed your story.
01/22/16
I loved your story! - having been in Kenya. I would agree that you need to separate the paragraphs.

You did a great job on nailing the topic. You kept my attention the whole way through. Keep writing - and God bless.
01/22/16
I enjoyed this very much! I also agree about the paragraphs, but the flow and construction of the story kept me engaged.
01/22/16
I could very easily visualize your characters! With each new entry, you'll gain confidence as you sharpen your writing skills. Great testimony of person-to-person evangelism!

Wing His Words
01/27/16
Good job! I enjoyed this piece and your approach for this weeks topic.

God bless~
01/28/16
Congratulations on your placement! A fine job on this.