The Official Writing Challenge
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12/10/15
This is a very interesting collection of thoughts. I especially like the acrostic! Very vivid concepts. Nice work
12/11/15
Wow! I loved this powerful and penetrating piece!

It's so obvious that your heart is on fire for the Lord, I loved it!

God bless~
It is hard for me to critique special works like these but in the last sentence I would replace the word "and" with a comma or semi colon.

Keep expressing your thoughts and feelings.
12/13/15
Vivid description in poem. The acrostic poem was creative.
12/16/15
A different approach. I enjoyed this.