The Official Writing Challenge
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11/18/15
You have some great thoughts here. I agree, we need to be bold and strong in the Lord in these times.
It would improve your writing to find someone to help you with your puntuation and sentence structures.
Great writing! Keep it up.
11/18/15
Your thoughts are clear and you are bold about the need to put God first. With a little work, this could be an excellent story!