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TITLE: The Truth that lies in the gaps | Previous Challenge Entry
By Douglas Eckert
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Good versus evil
Is it as simple as that?
Is it this grey zone?
This nebulous, unclarified, ever expanding gap ...
That always always always!
is our soul snaring trap?
This Great unclarity
that is the giant chasm:
Between What we KNOW we should do,
and the tracks following our shoes
The great unclarified expanding gap:
Between what the news says goes on
and what we see is REALLY wrong.
Between hearsay
and heresy
The great unclarified expanding gap:
Between the mouth
and the money
Between the peculiar
and the funny
Between the bitter truth
and the lieing honey
The great unclarified expanding gap:
Between a loving hug
and a mind altering drug
Between a hunter's rights
and a murderous thug
Between not paying attention and not collecting your pension
Between a good intention and political dissension
The great unclarified expanding gap:
Between an epidemic run wild
and an autistic child
Between a marriage that is open
And a divorce case that is shut
Between GMO foods
and a massacred gut
Between a missing body part, and a medical trust defiled
Between the bored child
and the child beguiled
The great unclarified expanding gap:
Between free speech
and a security breach
Between kissing the frog
and the prince that is dashing
Between self righteous tongue lashing
and the gay bashing
Between the base hating
and the race baiting
Between the loud political thief
and the silent appointed one
Between what's REALLY good for us
and what SEEMS fun
Its between all THESE kinds of gaps
that the devil runs
Wreaking death and destruction on everyone!
Because the ultimate gap is
between when WE believe and OTHERS bereave:
it's the Spirit of Truth that was delivered by the Father's Resurrected Son,
that fills in this ever expanding great gap
with CLARITY and a soul saving awakening
Satan slaying slap!
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Comma errors plague many writers and I noticed them in your entry.
For example:
always always always!
should read:
always, always, always!
I encourage you to check out Jan's writing basics on the Forum. She has lessons on comma usage. Quite enlightening.
Job well done.
Between ever two or three lines that are a unit, place this line: "The great unclarified expanding gap:" This should make it more organized, structured and easier to follow.
We must not live in the gray gap as that is the same as living in the dark.
Good thoughts.