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Topic: THE WHOLE WORLD IN GOD’S HANDS (not the song) (05/28/15)
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TITLE: God's Love | Previous Challenge Entry
By carrie yantz
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His Kingdom on earth as it is in heaven. For healing, understanding, forgiveness for our sins, if it wasn’t for Jesus dying on the cross we would not have forgiveness from our sins, as in JOHN 3:16 for god so loved the world he gave his only begotten son! and without Jesus dying on the cross we would be in worse shape then we are now? Considering the fact that we are all sinners in some way? For we are not perfect! His love for us does not want that for us! But to be happy and not sin! but to be set free from sin, as it say’s in, Romans 6:22 But now that you have been set free from sin and have become slaves of God, the benefit you reap leads to holiness, and the result is eternal life!! And we should not take that for granted? For we are only here for a short amount of time!, and for when the time does come to leave this earth we can join him in his kingdom in heaven., and having a eternal life from sin ,A sin free life is the only way to receive a everlasting life in heaven, But for those who do receive it will have treasures in heaven as well as here on earth, But for those that don’t live a sin free life will be a servant to the devil ,satin will control your life and you will not receive eternal life as it is written. What would you rather receive the joy of Christ in your life and be happy or worship the devil and earthly possessions and live without peace and happiness and that’s what he really wanted for us all.
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Be careful about overusing exclamation points. Try to use them sparingly and reserve it for dialog. You also had some question marks where a period was needed and vice versa. Also when quoting the Bible, make sure you put it in quotation marks and cite the translation used.
I can feel your love for God and your desire to share that love with others. With some editing and tweaking, this would make a nice devotion. If you haven't checked out FW daily devotions, I'd urge you to do so and submit some to encourage others. Keep writing and read and comment on as many challenge entries that you can.