The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/05
I think you had three or four things you wanted to say that would have been better off separated into two/three articles. You did a good job with the aspect of our obedience making us strong.
I liked the flow of your piece. You illustrated well the spiritual battle that rages within everyone of us. Thanks,
02/14/05
Very good. You hit the truth nail right on the head when you said that it is us who make the simplicity of obedience difficult. I like the way you wrote that line.