The Official Writing Challenge
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Very true.
04/23/15
Well said and on topoic. Good message


One of the sciptures that comes to mind after reaading your entry is 1 Thess 5:16-18. Rejoice always, pray without ceasing, in everything give thanks; for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus for you..

God bless~
04/23/15
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Well said and on topic. Good messagem thank you!


One of the sciptures that comes to mind after reaading your entry is 1 Thess 5:16-18... Rejoice always, pray without ceasing, in everything give thanks; for this is the will of God in Christ Jesus for you..

God bless~
04/23/15
Wow- something is wrong with my computer today?

I apologize.

God bless~
This is quite lovely. You do a nice job of writing on topic while delivering a great message.

My only red ink is that I've read several pieces quite similar to yours. On the forums, there is the best writing resource on the Internet called Jan's Writing Basics. Once she gave a lesson about thinking outside the box. She said when you read the topic, write down your first five ideas, then throw them out because it's likely others had those same ideas. It has really helped me to think outside of the box.

Your piece is well-written and a pleasant read. You make some great points and are definitely on topic. Overall, you did a fine job. Keep writing, though because I predict God has great plans for you.