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04/23/15
Excellent message here.Thank you for sharing with us.
God bless~
04/24/15
I appreciate you reminding us how important thankfulness should be in our lives.
This was a good reminder to be thankful.

When you began, you listed the ways to be thankful: physically, psychologically, mentally and even socially, but you did not explain them in that order. I usually expect orderly examples when the ideas are presented at the beginning. It could just be me, I like systematic thinking.
04/25/15
Like the nine lepers that forgot to turn around and say thanks - we often forget to be thankful - as well as forget its many benefits. Thanks for sharing.
I think you make some wonderful points. It's not easy to be thankful in all things, but if we allow him, God can turn the worst of times into a blessing.

This is more my opinion and I know not everyone feels this way, but sometimes when the second person (you) is used, I feel like I'm being lectured. I tend to relate more if the person writes in the first person. It makes me feel like I'm not alone. For example, you could do something like this:A physically thankful attitude helps me in a number of ways. If I can't sleep, I use the time to give thanks. Before, I know it, counting my blessings helps me feel restful.

I really liked the Scriptures you used. They really reinforce your great message. I can definitely feel your passion and your desire to spread the joy Jesus has given you with others. Nice job.