The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/15
I found myself chuckling out loud as I read your intriguing ant saga. Poor Dom. I had to dispatch a wasp today with my mouse pad before anyone got stung. He didn't have a name however.
Interesting story since most all of us have spent some time looking at ants.

Check your verb tenses. Sometimes the present and past are mixed up.

Good thoughts went into the writing.
04/13/15
Unique and clever use of the topic! Well done.

God bless~