The Official Writing Challenge
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03/19/15
Beautifully done.

God bless~
You did a lovely job of showing how God loves us. Your descriptions are beautiful and I could feel your emotions in every word. The only red ink I might offer would be to show the witch more to create that conflict and highlight the victory of love. I think you absolutely nailed the topic in an interesting and powerful way. You did a great job from beginning to end.
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