The Official Writing Challenge
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12/06/05
I love the title
"Seasons of my soul". Message is obvious and very welcome. I commend the poem as a neat piece of art. God Bless.
12/06/05
oh yeah and first line of the second stanza, might wanna revise it, subject and verb don't really agree very well. Otherwise neat artwork.
12/07/05
Very lovely message. Work on some of the things that make a great poem: consistent meter and rhyme scheme, word choice, and punctuation. You beautifully captured the mood of spring.