The Official Writing Challenge
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11/14/14
I enjoyed this piece and loved the wrap up. Sounds like an actual event that happened.

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11/16/14
I enjoyed reading your story! It seemed very believable to me, and your writer's voice came through clearly - good job!!
11/17/14
Thanks for the story, enjoyed your bus journey could really picture it. Maybe a bit more about Paris itself as a travelogue but felt your distress
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