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Topic: Cat and Dog (09/04/14)
In the dark space of time, two spirits were fighting like cat and dog over who should have power through-out the whole universe. The sinful one was cast out from the heavenly realm because of his possessive attributes.

I am, had created man and woman in his image. The traitor known as Lucifer had enticed Eve to eat from the tree of life,

it was her that encouraged Adam to also take a bite of the forbidden fruit. In doing so, the messiah’s punishment was not that of anger but love as he made Adams wife heavy with child-this became his way of multiplying the world!

For centuries He had spoken to his multitude but as the days grew and the years progressed, the great one realised his creation was in ruins, so He sent his only son; Jesus to change the minds of many people to cease sinning.

Jesus gave up his life so that individuals from all around the world may live, take up your cross and follow me, he preached to thousands, (Matthew 16:24) but a throng of people were not forward in accepting his words and continued in their own light.

The Son of God has many followers to say the least, some of them became disciples and followed in his footsteps but along the way even these individuals found it hard to keep on the right track.

There was Thomas who doubted his every word and being also Matthew, the tax collector and Peter who denied him three times, if that isn’t bad enough, Judas Iscariot betrayed him for thirty pieces of silver.

Although these people from years ago; before your time and mine were godly people they also knew sorrow and fell on hard times forgetting who they were but in their despair, Jesus and his heavenly father-God never gave up believing in them and in your darkest moments, you too must never stop believing!

It’s on the cross Jesus was able to fulfil his destiny leaving the Holy Spirit to wash over individuals and cleanse them in their misguided paths. The wrong-doer found it easy to send people into his pit of destruction.

He took on the name Satan; it was this name that gave him more power over the kingdom, he began creating worlds for his followers all over the universe. Many of these had been believers of the all-powerful deity.

Why did they change their minds, no-body except them and God will really know that answer, one thing is certain, they think they’re having a good time but there not really.

It’s just Satan encouraging them to go out drinking, have sex with strangers, sometimes with the same sex and that’s not all, he also entices them to backstab each other, even those who love each other.

God, the father see’s and knows what is going on in our sad, twisted planet, but his love remains quiet allowing us to discover for ourselves the wrong-doing in our lives.

It is for this reason alone I am remains silent but still in signs, he leads us back onto the golden path that restores us back to him.

It is but a spiritual war, the evil one thinks he’s got power over the universe but hope fills the land and the tempter of all humans will be thrown into a playground where only he exists. This may not be for a time yet but it will happen, and the saviour of all-mankind will be champion!

What has got to happen before this finally takes place no-one knows, but humanity must be restored to what it was. Jesus’ return has been expected on many occasions but as it is written "Watch therefore: for ye know not what hour your Lord doth come." —Matthew 24:42

Have you ever lost a loved one? If so, you store them in your heart and mind and this is what our Lord and Saviour wants us to do in remembering his teachings and existence upon the earth.

Love vanquishes evil every time but the dark destroyer (Satan) will continue tempting us into his dark world of betrayal, knowing our mortal souls can become rebellious. God hears us every-time we communicate (prayer) to him.

The ruler of the universe knows everything but still likes us, his children to inform him what we are going through in our daily lives.

It is through our prayers that the broken world can be restored and in so doing we shall be united!
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Larry Whittington
09/12/14
I like the thought of unity you develop in your story.

One thing to be careful of, though, is Bible facts. Eve ate from the tree of knowledge of good and evil. The tree of life is reserved in heaven for all faithful followers of God's ways.

Also baptism washes us clean or forgives our sin and then we are given the Holy Spirit to live within us as children of God. (See Acts chapter 2)

I really liked the great effort and energy you put into this work.
C D Swanson 
09/12/14
Your message was clear and filled with love of God. Your heart was truly in the story and it shined right on through the entire piece.

Nicely done.


God bless~
Olawale Ogunsola
09/13/14
Thanks for sharing this rich piece. It shows God's love and grace since beginning that continues today. We shall be united one day when the Lord comes.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 
09/17/14
You have some interesting facts here. I can feel your passion for wanting to share God with others. You may want to work on your transitions some because to me it felt like some random lines, but they needed more connection. Think of transitions as a thread holding the entire piece together. If you haven't checked out Jan's Writing Basics on the message boards, I'd urge you to do so. She has some great advice for all levels of writers. I do think you showed the reader a glimpse of how vast God's love is for us. That's such an important message that we all need to hear and share with others. Good job.