The Official Writing Challenge
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02/11/05
Nicely written. It would have been good to separate your points with paragraphs. Most readers of Christian material would already know the points you have made, so I would encourage you to dig deeper so that we can be pleasantly surprised with a new insight into the Word.
I agree that paragraphs would make for easier reading, but overall a nicely written piece.

God bless,