The Official Writing Challenge
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11/30/05
I really liked your story-and I loved your conclusion. However, this was really harder to read and to take the beautiful message from because the paragraphs were not double spaced out. Edit this, and it will be wonderful. God bless ya, littlelight
11/30/05
Your simple, honest assessment brought tears to my eyes! I almost didn't read this (please break up your paragraphs with extra spaces for ease of readability) but I'm SOOOO glad I did. There is so much great truth in there - I hope it strikes a chord with a lot of people who assume they're saved. Keep writing - you have a great message to share!
Yours was definitely one of my top picks this week. Kudos!
12/02/05
Written with a voice that makes one want to keep reading. Very approachable. Break into smaller paragraphs, and this will be one of the better devotionals I've seen here.