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07/17/14
This would make a nice devotional. Make it a little more easy on the eye by breaking up into several paragraphs. Good job:)
This piece has a good start, and it is filled with good ideas for a devotional. Breaking it into paragraphs would not only be easier on the eye, but would also help the focus.
You have given us some good reminders about prayer.

One interesting prayer Jesus prayed (maybe his last prayer) he asked for this cup to be taken from him but not my will but yours. God's answer to this prayer was a "Yes". God answered Jesus's prayer with a yes but it was not really what Jesus wanted.

Keep your eyes in his word.
07/18/14
A lesson we need to be reminded of often. Good Job. I agree with the others. Take the suggestions to heart and keep writing. Your words express your heart. Keep up the good work.
07/21/14
Powerful and meaningful devotional...well done.

God bless~
This is a nice piece. I liked how you gave a modern example to showcase the Bible verses you selected. You make some great points.

You might want to consider using examples from your life instead of the universal you. For example:I've experienced good and bad times, and I've learned that praying makes the dark days easier while praising God for those splendid experiences makes me remember them more.

Just by doing something as little as that can pull the reader in and help her relate to your words. You have an encouraging and understanding way about you. It shines through the screen and warms my heart.