The Official Writing Challenge
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06/05/14
THis was so powerful and moving, it brought me close to tears. You certainly elicited raging emotions in this well written entry.

God bless you~
06/05/14
It is so great to see the work God does in the lives of those who hear his voice! Thank you for sharing!

On a technical side, there were some grammatical errors such as "they're" rather than "their".
06/06/14
I am using this for my morning devotional. What a wonderful example of what Christianity is All about. I know those minor grammatical errors will inspire you to work harder. Great job!
06/09/14
This is a great "Chicken Soup For The Soul" type of true life story. How awesome things can turn out to be when you listen to God's promptings and then actually do what He's asking.

As others have pointed out, there are a few grammar and style issues, but nothing that really took away from your story and nothing that won't work itself out if you keep writing (which I sincerely hope you do).

Great job!
What a powerful and touching story. Keep writing. You are truly a blessing. Thank you
06/11/14
I enjoyed this encouraging testimony style piece. Faith and obedience always brings great results. "It wasn't raining when Noah built the ark."

I've always liked that Ford quote about cutting your own wood. You have a wonderful talent that I know God is going to use for His glory. Keep up the good work.
06/13/14
John,

Congratulations!
SO happy for you. Well done, keep them coming.

God bless~