The Official Writing Challenge
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05/16/14
Excellent job with the topic. I really enjoyed this well written entry.

God bless~
Strong emotions fill your story.

Gossip can be either something stated that is true or it can be something stated that is false. If it would be false it could also be classed as slander. What the brothers talked about would have been true. Their gossip stirred up hatred within themselves to such a degree they began to wish harm to come. Only the one brother interfered and kept this from happening.

This is a good story to show one danger of gossip.
It seems like you were there inside their heads.
Family strife and jealousy ..and scapegoating all in one.

We all know thankfully that this true story had a good ending in which everyone learned a lesson.

Good job!