The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/05
Anticipation. Nice, descriptive. I've had nights like that (LOL)
Thank the Lord for his rest. God bless ya, littlelight
11/21/05
From one insomniac to another--I feel your pain! You captured the frustration well in this poem.

Watch the spelling of "its"--when it is a contraction (meaning "it is") it needs an apostrophe.
11/22/05
An honest critique? No rhythm, no rhyme. But then I'm no pro on the new type poetry that doesn't rhyme. So, What do I know? Smile.