The Official Writing Challenge
This article has been read 269 times
Member Comments
Good story in poem form.

About the poems, I am of the old school of thought. I like to have the same number of lines in each verse. This usually takes a lot of extra editing - more than just editing for a story - and this takes extra time.

I like the rhyming you used. This also takes a lot of word searching and a good ear.

I liked how it taught a lesson we should consider for our own lives.
Aww, this touched my heart. You wrote this straigth from your heart and it will no doubt touch other hearts as well. Good job.

God bless~
I enjoyed this poem. A couple of the rhymes sounded just a little bit forced. I struggle with that also. The message was clear and well written. Good Job.