The Official Writing Challenge
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Each of your paragraphs seem to be about one central theme which is good writing.

I had never heard about that story before. That was interesting. I wonder (if the story was true) if those Mongols then listened to the missionaries. If they would have believed that Jesus was both Lord and Christ, repented of their sin and were baptized for the forgiveness of their sin, they would have been the first Christians in that area. Praise God.

I liked the double spacing between the paragraphs because this makes it easier for me to read.
11/23/13
Fantastic devotional with a powerful message.

I loved the segue into your overall story, and the continuous explanations of each verse by examples.

Excellent work.

God bless~
11/26/13
Thank you for this wonderful devotional style piece. I too used God's word" as being "straight from the source". I knew many would probably use this, but wanted to put a new spin on it. I think you did well. Just a tip: When you reference God as He or Him, it is usually capitalized. Keep writing for Him!