The Official Writing Challenge
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Good play on words for the title and the metaphor of Saul's life. It was a nice, short little glimpse into how this story played out.

Just a tip though--make sure to add in extra spaces when there is more than one speaker. When God's voice speaks and Saul answers, it all runs together in the same paragraph. Just hit an extra space/enter and bump it to the second paragraph so it reads easier.

Good job and thanks for sharing!
05/16/13
Very good story form of Paul's radical meeting with the Lord. I like how you called him a ring-leader.
Blessings, LaVonne
05/18/13
I felt the intensity of the story grow as I read about Saul's journey to Damascus and how he aimlessly pursued to find Jesus Christ's followers and how the Lord Jesus intervened by blinding Paul with a bright light. I thought your title "Son Beam" was very original and blended into the story with ease. Great Job!!!
05/18/13
Great reminder of a timeless bible story. Your words flowed and it kept my attention. Especially liked the last sentence. Blessings and Keep writing.
05/21/13
I loved your title, and the narrative moved smoothly and kept my interest all the way. Good job!
05/22/13
Good job, this held my attention from start to end.

God bless~