The Official Writing Challenge
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Although the ending is incongruous, the work itself appears to be a tough but realistic look at the tragic thoughts of a suicidal victim. Extremely well written, although dark introscpection.
Congratulations on your "highly commended" win this week. Keep writing.Kudos to you!
Congratulations Leesha on your Win. I Love these beautiful words.
“ I look to her face, but my tears veil her. Watching the clouds start to shift as they empty, a patch of heavenly blue beckons. With her hand on my shoulder, she says, “God made you because you are beautiful, and you are beautiful because he made you.” Thanks for sharing and God Bless. Helen

Congrats on your placement. Well done.