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Very sweet story and very nicely written. It is tough when you are in a rut with your thoughts. Im glad God used you to bring Richard some peace and helping him to change his gloomy thoughts. Praise God!
Amen and Amen! Loved this.

God bless~
This is an interesting story. You intrigued me with this moving banter between the characters. There are some errors, missing quotation marks, and using your instead of you're. A good proofreader will help you with all of that. You did a nice job of writing on topic while still educating the reader about this devastating disorder. Good job.