The Official Writing Challenge
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02/10/05
The law is our schoolmaster to lead us to Christ and the Marines must be a perfect place to learn "obedience by the things
suffered". Thanks for sharing your testimony.
02/11/05
You write well but I can't see the two stories being drawn together. One story is your enlistment, the other is your schooling - you can draw them together by bringing the army back in as your last paragraph to round things up.
I agree with the previous comment. I do like your approach, though, with disobedience leading to obedience. God is good at teaching us what we need to know, in spite of ourselves!

God bless,