The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a clever take on the topic. I liked how you used the playground equipment as a metaphor for life. This definitely defined park while delivering a great message.
I could really relate to your see-saw with ups and downs of life, and balance needed, then emotions that surface. Your devotional message struck a chord with me. Thank you.
Good job of using the park as a metaphor. But I was a little confused by your opening line. It says the opposite of what the rest of the piece states.