The Official Writing Challenge
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11/07/05
This is so much like the previous entry that it breaks my heart...why do we do such things to our brothers and sisters?

Your heart cry was very evident. It will be easier on your readers if you do not use all caps, and also avoid unnecessary apostrophes. Keep writing--yours is a voice that needs to be heard.
11/08/05
I agree with the other two comments. Listen to the Lord and He will give you His music special for you.
11/08/05
God does hear our cries! And He will use you in many ways! Thanks for sharing this journey you have gone through.
11/10/05
Very nice piece! By writing in the first person, you added a great deal of depth and meaning. It also teaches a powerful lesson about spiritual fortitude, that shows how God embraces each one of us as individuals, and He is truly glorified when we use our talents for Him. Keep writing! You have a wonderful way of capturing feelings and describing them in such a way that a reader relates very well to your message.
11/12/05
What a wonderful testimony (I believe)! We have all felt like this, you know, and God is so merciful. Keep singing!
11/13/05
Thank you for sharing this part of your journey. Be encouraged. God will find a place and a time for you to share your gifts.