The Official Writing Challenge
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Very unique take on the topic...beautifully written and great message!
Nicely done and written. I enjoyed this beautiful entry with an equally beautiful message. Thanks. God bless~
Very unique. I loved it.

God bless!
This is a powerful piece. I could feel the MC's pain as I read and it gave me some flashbacks of a time when I was hurting deeply. This line was especially powerful for me--Never to do be used again I think many of us understand what it feels like to be used. Instead of the bad being used now I'm offering myself to God with a hearty Here I am Lord use me. I could sense that maybe that was what your MC was searching for too.
Cute, curious, unique, and fun... enjoyed your prose.

Great entry. Keep writing.
I always enjoy reading poetry/prose and yours was no exception. Thanks for sharing.