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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Question (05/24/12)
“Who told you that you are naked?”
Adam and Eve were asked when they had eaten the tree that was sacred
Alone and ashamed they had no answer
As sin had started to eat at them like cancer

“What does thou here?” Elijah was questioned
The miracles that had kept him alive God had not even mentioned
Struck by fear of the evil Jezebel he had fled for his life
Forgetting his victories and focusing on the strife

“Where is thine brother?” was the question to Cain
Who out of disobedience and jealously his brother he’d slain
And though he thought he had hidden his sin forevermore
All he only shut out salvation and bolted the door

What have you done to save your brother?
And have you with the resources I have given you been a giver?
These questions the Lord will require of us all
On the day of judgment when He makes that call
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C D Swanson 
05/31/12
Good job with the topic and a well written entry. Thank you. I liked this short, but powerful piece.

God Bless~
Joanne Sher 
06/04/12
These definitely are great questions. I'll be pondering them for a while. Great message too! Thanks.
Shann Hall-LochmannVanBennekom 
06/04/12
You did a nice job of pulling out famous questions of the Bible.

In spots I had trouble with the flow, I'm not sure how you would fix I just know I stumbled. Someone once suggested to me to have someone read my work aloud. If they stumble over a sentence then I should work on rewording it.

You did a nice job of staying true to the topic. I also like pieces that make me stop and think or pull out my Bible and explore more on my own. Nice job.
Geoffrey johnstone
06/07/12
This is well written. My only problem is that the last question isn't from God and reads like a guilt trip.

You have a great talent and I hope you continue to refine it.