The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/05
Because of the long first line the poetics become prose like. I wonder if this is better said as a poetic essay rather than a poem. Read this poem outloud and see what you think. blessings - dub
11/02/05
Yes, I agree with dub. I took it to be more of a poetic essay. I guess there are many roads on a poetic path.
I still enjoyed reading!
God bless ya, littlelight
11/02/05
Thanks for the reminder that we should not take God's gifts for granted. The sense of smell is truly a great gift and can bring memorable moments to us.
11/03/05
Thanks for the reminder.
Good reminder, Erica!
Awwww... you wrote such a beautiful entry here, it makes me realize what I'm missing out on because I can't smell!