The Official Writing Challenge
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11/01/05
The imperative nature of this makes it a mini sermon. Watch the punctuation. A good message, share it with someone.
11/02/05
I especially loved the last paragraph. Nice work and enjoyed reading. God bless ya, littlelight
11/02/05
I too like your last paragraph and the way you compare life to the rose.
11/03/05
Quite a few themes here: hurrying, roses, bank accounts--I think this could be simplified a bit. But the message is strong by the end, and something we all need to heed.