The Official Writing Challenge
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Loved this. I saw all of the images so vividly in my mind's eye. Fabulous descriptive piece. Nicely done.

God Bless~
This is so beautiful. It's so easy to forget to notice those little things in life that are really quite huge.

The only thing I wondered is if you meant to put it in this format or perhaps a more traditional poem with the four lines in each verse. Hitting preview before submit will allow you to see what it'll look like to the reader.

There were so many lines that touched me and that I can relate to. I often say I think heaven will smell like clothes fresh from the line. Your poem was heavenly.
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