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03/17/12
Interesting entry...I expected to be reading about an unwed teen mother. The transition into just exactly who she was speaking of was a smooth one. Well-told story!
03/18/12
Beautiful, simply beautiful! I love the way you told this story. This could have been any mother and to hve it turn out to be Mary made it really precious. And so timely, with Easter on the way.
03/21/12
Nice recollections of a mother. Yes, I believe Mary "pondered" many things in her heart.
03/21/12
Wow - this was a wonderful story and as the others said, it can apply to "any mother." But what a beautiful ending, filled with faith, promises and love. Just like Jesus.

Good job!
God Bless~
Congratulations for placing 9th in level one!
Congratulations for placing 8th in level one! Oops sorry I goofed before yours and another one tied for 8th not 9th!