The Official Writing Challenge
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"Cute" story! I think this is a woman's worse nightmare. I found your story to flow quite nicely. It read smoothly and the story line was very good. The transition from AAA coming out, to them parting I thought played out well. All in all, I enjoyed your story very much.
A well written entry that held my attention from the first word to the last.

Nice job with this.

God Bless~
This is a good story. Ahh the wisdom of an 18 yo! (my youngest just turned into an adult as she likes to say) I thought once the tow truck showed up and she got out of the car the friendly stranger was going to turn into a bad guy. You had my heart pounding.
Great story!
Congratulations for placing 11th in level 1!
Carol, I'm going to feature this story in the Front Page Showcase for the week of May 14. Look for it on the FaithWriters home page--and congratulations!
Thanks Jan, what a priviledge! I appreciate the opportunity!