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TITLE: She Made Change - In Me | Previous Challenge Entry
By Allen Povenmire
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Now, making change in the offering plate has long been a topic of humorists. Jeff Foxworthy has used it in his well-known “You Might Be a Redneck” routines. One of my friends from the church came up to me and asked, “Did I really see what I thought I saw??” We shared a chuckle about the moment. Several others asked me about the moment as well. No one had ever seen what had occurred. But, after the moment had passed further, this lasting thought came to my mind: the woman didn’t have to give anything at all. She had the appearance of one who didn’t have much to give, but she gave anyway. She could have stayed seated, saving herself the pointed attention and probable embarrassment of coming up the aisle. Maybe that twenty dollars represented a great amount to her and her giving a portion of it was really a big deal. It might have been a bigger sacrifice than any of us who initially scoffed at her actions realized.
In the Gospel of Mark 12: 41 - 44, we read:
41 Jesus sat down opposite the place where the offerings were put and watched the crowd putting their money into the temple treasury. Many rich people threw in large amounts. 42 But a poor widow came and put in two very small copper coins, worth only a few cents. 43 Calling his disciples to him, Jesus said, “Truly I tell you, this poor widow has put more into the treasury than all the others. 44 They all gave out of their wealth; but she, out of her poverty, put in everything—all she had to live on.”
Every time I’ve read that passage, I’ve thought of that woman walking up the aisle with her offering. Her humility left a lasting impression on me. Honestly, I’m afraid I would have been too prideful to carry out her act. She’s just one of dozens of nameless people God has used to teach me something I needed. I’m grateful for her lesson.
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Lord help us to be less judgmental and more in tune to your Spirit so we are slower to have an opinion or gossip and quicker to offer kindness and acceptance. God bless your writing-wonderful thoughts.
You need to work on your paragraph construction a bit; but other than that, well done.
With a little polishing, this would make an outstanding devotion. Try using shorter paragraphs when writing a shorter article. Also make sure you include which translation of the Bible when quoting verses.
This message is outstanding. I'd love to see you add a heartfelt prayer and consider submitting it to a devotional magazine. This is beautiful!