The Official Writing Challenge
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That was hilarious! Wasn't sure where on earth you were going with this, but when I reached the end, I busted a gut laughing!
10/24/05
I suspect that this HAS to be a true story! So funny!
Very funny! I sure am glad it rained. Good writing.
Oh how funny! God always has a way of showing us when we get too big for our own britches, doesn't he?
Noticed a few missing words here and there, but with some minor editing this would be great. It was a fun reminder of the joys of being young! Thanks for the laugh. Good job.
10/28/05
I know this was soooo ridiculously funny but so many things happen like that, especially when we're kids--I had to chuckle at the end. What a great reminder! It's so good that we can look back on things and laugh with someone! Thank you God for the rain! littlelight
10/28/05
This was to cute!! I loved your ending. Ther were only a few tiny errors but I bet you noticed them as soon as you posted! Nice writing..hope to read more stories like this.
10/29/05
Cute, brought a smile to my face. Heed the comments above. Thanks for posting.