The Official Writing Challenge
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Cute Title. I enjoyed the comical elements with the cups falling and breaking. Nice job with that. Nice ending as well.
07/30/11
Cute story! I'm wondering if it is fiction or if this is your story. ;) I really liked the ending. Pretty funny that the PK who wants to get away from daddy becomes a pastor's wife.

Good job. :)
07/31/11
wonderful story and told with humor and engaging. loved the title loved the story! seemed so true to life! hope it is a winner. one of MY favorites this week!
08/04/11
well done for getting onto the winners board with your HC slot. as i said before you are one of my favorites