The Official Writing Challenge
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04/28/11
I really liked this article. I think many struggle with being successful according to God's will without being prideful. I like how you used all "p" words. It makes it easier to remember.
04/29/11
Good teaching! We NEED to know how to follow God, and let Him take over as we yield our talents to Him. I liked this!
You wrote a nice sermon with some good advice. I noticed your used a lot of explanation points say to limit them for dialog. Let your words stand alone, they are powerful enough to standby themselves. I liked the scriptures you used; they went well withyour message.
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