The Official Writing Challenge
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Beautifully written. It gives a person much to chew on. I had to read it a couple of times to understand the deeper meaning, but once I did it made a lot of sense.
this is lovely :-)
I thought it was under the word count but i see you have very cleverly done 151 words in this poem.
you have carefully chose the words so that each one is measured and contains great meaning.
thank you
you have a gift there
You entry made me feel like I want to go write in my journal! Inspiring a writer to write is a good thing. You expressed yourself so well. Loved the last line especially.