The Official Writing Challenge
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There are some very good reminders here!

Try to so some more "showing" rather than "telling." I know it can be hard in a piece like this that's more devotional in nature, but try to use dialogue rather than just telling us about your questions.

I loved your last paragraph. Keep writing!
Very good. It brings back memories, which is what it should do, and it give hope.
You gave some great advice in this piece and it was nice to see the world through your eyes.
A very good essay with a good message. Not really on topic, but I enjoyed it.